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Hold me as I cry
Say you'll stay or I'll die
Dejected from my memories
There's nothing to set my soul at ease

There is hell to pay
So don't you turn away
I am cursed within my time
Forever even till the end of time

Fallen angels come undone
(Damned for life)
Blinding the sun
(Darkness comes)
Lovers die on the streets
(Hatred grows)
Leaving hearts incomplete
(Hopelessness)

Betrayed by their lies
Echoes immobilize
My senses into sadness
Till I fall, succumbing to madness

No one hears my cries
No use to stand and rise
For I'm cursed within my time
Forever even till the end of time

Fallen angels come undone
(Damned for life)
Blinding the sun
(Darkness comes)
Lovers die on the streets
(Hatred grows)
Leaving hearts incomplete
(Hopelessness)

Iniquity across the land
Ghoulish voices come at hand
Fear strikes me in the heart,
Torturing me in the dark

Nightmares I dreamed have come true
Soon they will come and seize you
Plaguing you in your mind
There's no comfort you'll find

Fallen angels come undone
(Damned for life)
Blinding the sun
(Darkness comes)
Lovers die on the streets
(Hatred grows)
Leaving hearts incomplete
(Hopelessness)
©2009-2010 *Ferrychick1
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Author's Comments

Here's my lyric I'm trying to compose. I wrote about my emotional sadness. I'm always hopeless and when I think of my parents claiming negative things about my dreams I'm persuing (they want me to be realistic), I just write something related to how I feel: alone, numb, and in agony. My past is full of hell, lies, betrayel, loneliness, hatred, anger, and heartbreak. It's like I'm ready to die soon. I know I will not be missed...

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:iconlilyaquarius:
~LilyAquarius Jul 18, 2009, 11:19:15 AM
Ferry sweet, you know thats not true. You have friends and family I'm sure who love you very much. Maybe you aren't understood now, but there are people who do care about you.

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Ignorance and hate diminishes wisdom and peace.
:iconferrychick1:
Mood: Affection *Ferrychick1 Jul 18, 2009, 11:37:34 AM
You are sweet. I just write lyrics that are emotional. That is what most people want to hear in a song. Some pasts brought me back awful memories.

Anywho, I'm working on Chapter Two. I'll let you know when I'm done.
:iconlilyaquarius:
~LilyAquarius Jul 18, 2009, 2:24:08 PM
Good to know. On a side note, remember some people won't always like what you imagine or create. Some respond to it so negatively it often gets blown out of proposition and turned into this huge drama-fest. Its usually best to take good critiques into consideration, and simply ignore any troll's who want ruffle your feathers.

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Ignorance and hate diminishes wisdom and peace.
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*MouseAvenger Jul 19, 2009, 4:42:15 PM
Aww, don't worry about it, dear. :hug: I love & support you & your work; you're awesome beyond all words! ^_^

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GMD love is alive...& it lives in Winnie! XD

If there are no cats in America & the streets are paved with cheese, would they taste like Gouda or cheddar?

Meet me in another world, space & joy
Vous etes tres belle, mama, girls & boys
:icondramawolfie:
Mood: Tender ~dramawolfie Aug 13, 2009, 6:56:34 PM
theese are beautiful lryics and i know know you feel.

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i woke up this morning, and my cat stuck her head into my lamp shade....and then she bit me....and then she rubbed up againstmy head....shes a weird cat...TRUE STORY
:iconferrychick1:
Mood: Affection *Ferrychick1 Aug 13, 2009, 6:58:00 PM
Oh, thank you! It comes from inspiration and the heart.
:icondramawolfie:
~dramawolfie Aug 14, 2009, 10:24:34 AM
coming from the heart is ALWAYS the best!

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i woke up this morning, and my cat stuck her head into my lamp shade....and then she bit me....and then she rubbed up againstmy head....shes a weird cat...TRUE STORY
:icongoblinqueenselene:
*GoblinQueenSelene Sep 18, 2009, 7:48:49 AM
Beautiful lyrics!

*reads artist's comments and gasps* That's not true! Of course, you'd be missed! If your parents are anything like mine, they'd be heartbroken if anything happened to you!

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